Yo D,
I thought it was
good. I'm glad that it will continue with a part2 and/or 3 because you didn't
get a chance to develop the idea of, " 2) That you know what it’s like to be alone and accomplish goals on your
own. "
I think this is
essential because there is so much violence that people become inured to that
has little to do with hitting. As children, people should be given support and
encouragement to think highly of themselves and their futures. This should
involve helping the child discover and appreciate "Their powers" in a
multitude of ways.
They can create
and be loved for what they create. They can achieve and be loved for what they
achieve and even what they try to achieve.
I believe it is
nothing short of violence when a certain child is deemed a failure when it is
the system that is failing the child. It is nothing short of violence when
resources that could be used to help families are diverted to feed the
pockets of greedy, already absurdly wealthy individuals or corporations
or when people can't get nutritious food.
It is violence that brings a young girl to a mentality that makes her say,
"I like my man with a little thug in him."
If a person has
no sense of responsibility to others, they will never really learn how to love.
It is through the development of their powers and the sense of the value of
those powers that a person begins to see their own potential to change their
environment for the better, not only for themselves but for the ones they love
or may come to love.
E
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